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Writing for a purpose: a conservation campaign

Everything you have learned about animals is only useful if you can move a reader. Different readers need different writing, even when the facts are identical.

Lesson overview

What you'll learn in this lesson

Write for a wide range of purposes and audiences, selecting and organising ideas and information appropriately

Key learning points

  • • Three decisions before the first sentence
  • • Same facts, different writing
  • • Structure that persuades
  • • Techniques used sparingly

This lesson at a glance

  • 30 minutes
  • 18 parts to scroll through
  • 4 quick checks
  • Marked quiz at the end
  • Gentle pace: short sittings with pauses

Words to know

purposesaudiencesselectingorganisinginformation

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Writing for a purpose: a conservation campaign

An English teaching video on this topic from Oscott Manor School. Watch it, then scroll down for the lesson.

In a nutshell

Write for a wide range of purposes and audiences, selecting and organising ideas and information appropriately

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What you already know

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Before we start

What you already know

You should already know how to plan a piece of writing in paragraphs and how to punctuate accurately.

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Key words

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Key words

Words you'll need today

Purpose
What the writing is meant to achieve.
Audience
Who the writing is for.
Register
How formal or informal the language is.
Rhetorical question
A question asked for effect, not for an answer.
Call to action
A clear statement of what you want the reader to do.
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Learning cycle

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Learning cycle 1 of 2

Purpose, audience and form

A short piece of teaching, then a check to make sure it has landed.

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Explore the idea

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Learn

Three decisions before the first sentence

Decide the purpose (inform, persuade, argue, explain), the audience (a council officer, a school assembly, a funding body, readers of a newsletter) and the form (letter, speech, article, leaflet). Those three decisions set your register, your structure and how much evidence you must show.

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Explore the idea

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Learn

Same facts, different writing

For a council officer: formal register, costs, precedent, a specific request. For a school assembly: direct address, a story, one clear action. For a funding body: numbers, outcomes, and how success will be measured. Rewriting for a new audience is not repetition; it is the skill.

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Quick check

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Quick check

Which is the strongest call to action?

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Reset break

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Pause

That's sitting 1 of 2 done

Stretch, get a drink, look out of the window. There is no timer and nothing is counting down — your place is saved, so you can come back in five minutes or tomorrow.

Stop here for now
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Quick check

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Quick check

Writing to a council officer, the appropriate register is

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Learning cycle

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Learning cycle 2 of 2

Structuring persuasion that holds up

A short piece of teaching, then a check to make sure it has landed.

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Explore the idea

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Learn

Structure that persuades

Open with a concrete image or a striking figure. State the problem plainly. Give two or three pieces of evidence, strongest last. Acknowledge the honest counter-argument — farmers lose livestock, protection costs money — then answer it. Close with a specific call to action, not a wish.

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Explore the idea

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Learn

Techniques used sparingly

Rhetorical questions, patterns of three, direct address and emotive detail all work, but three well-placed techniques beat twenty. Precise fact plus one image outperforms exaggeration, because a reader who catches you overstating stops believing the rest.

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Quick check

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Quick check

Where should your strongest evidence sit in a persuasive piece?

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Quick check

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Quick check

Why acknowledge a counter-argument?

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Common mix-ups

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Common mix-ups

Things people often get wrong

  • Persuasive writing is weakened, not strengthened, by exaggeration.
  • Register should follow audience; a formal letter is not improved by slang or by very long words used incorrectly.
  • Acknowledging a counter-argument makes an argument stronger, not weaker.
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Challenge round

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Game · Sort it

Which of these are true?

Drag each card into the right column. Tap a card first if dragging is fiddly.

True

Not true

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Mastery quiz

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Marked quiz

End of lesson quiz: Writing for a purpose: a conservation campaign

6 questions, marked with the reasoning shown. No timer.

  1. 1. Purpose means

  2. 2. A speech to an assembly benefits most from

  3. 3. Emotive detail works best when

  4. 4. A funding body most wants to see

  5. 5. Which opening is most effective for an article?

  6. 6. Rewriting a piece for a new audience mainly changes

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Lesson round-up

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Lesson round-up

Ready when you are

Quiz score

Not sat

Games

Not played

Points this lesson

0

Best run

0 in a row

Luna: 0 out of 4 on the practice checks. Only if you feel up to it — one more?

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Do the work

Your written work for this lesson

This is the part you'd do in your book at school. Pick the pieces below, write here or on paper, and photograph anything you draw or work out.

Extract

The last bus

The bus shelter smelled of wet coats. Mira pressed her timetable flat against the glass, as though staring at the numbers might make the 9:42 appear. Rain tapped the roof in small, impatient fingers. Somewhere behind her, a shop shutter came down with a sound like a full stop.

She had been brave all day. She had been brave in the corridor, brave at lunch, brave when the register reached her name and nobody looked up. Being brave, she decided, was mostly a matter of keeping your face still.

Headlights swung around the corner and lit the puddles gold. Mira picked up her bag. Tomorrow she would say something. Tonight she would simply go home.

Original extract written for Good Learning Co.

Reading questions

  1. Find two words or phrases that show how Mira is feeling, and explain what each one suggests.
  2. How does the writer use the weather and the sounds to build the mood? Use a short quotation.
  3. Write the next paragraph in the same style, keeping the writer's short sentences at the moments that matter.

  • Reading response

    Reading

    Read the extract again, then write about how the writer makes you feel that way. Use a short quotation and explain your choice of words.

    2 paragraphs (PEE)

  • Extended writing

    Writing

    Write your piece in full, then redraft the opening so it hooks the reader.

    250–350 words

  • Reading log

    Reading

    Note the book, the pages you read and one thing you noticed about the writing.

    20 minutes' reading

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